Hi my name is Amy an I am a year 8 at mokoia Intermedatie my favioute things to do are tech arts and reading and my hobbies are roller skating and netball.
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Wednesday, 15 May 2013
Procedural writing
yesterday we did a procedural writing excise were we had to create a obstacle course for another person and we had to guide through a course only using our voice to guide them and these are the thigs that give good instructions
I like how you have used bubbl.us to show how good instructions are given. How could you improve your written description to make it better for your reader? What changes should you make?
I like how you have used bubbl.us to show how good instructions are given. How could you improve your written description to make it better for your reader? What changes should you make?
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